Rough Cut

Strengths

• good costume
• adds mystery
• builds tension
• good camera angles

Weakness

• too long on certain shots
• too gross
• not a full rough cut but the opening graveyard shot is our actual first shot
  

Student Thriller video

This student opening has simmilar aspects and conventions that we are planning to use.
Main things in common:
. Set in butchers
. knife shots
. meat carving shots

LOcation Location (our ideas for locations)

We have thought out a few possible locations in which we would be ready to film in these include:

.Dark room(photography block) -this will be shots of our inspector/detective developing his prints , we may have to concider how we light this scene though.

.A college office(senior staff office)-this will be the scene of the ins
pector behind his desk reviewing the case

.A isolated street - freestyle filming find location on the day (cambridge)

>''Butchers'' - Mill Rd -scenes in the back room and front of the shop.